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When it was easter me and my dad are bilding a tree hut. Also i was driveing my dads qwadbike up to the tree hut. I was bakeing a banna cake by myself wall kit my little brother crakt one egg but i did the rest of the banna cake i have been doing jobs for mum and dad
Hi Chase, I would love to see a photo of your tree hut and hear more about the games you and Kit play in it. How was your banana cake? Was it delicious? Next time I would love to see you add more detail to your writing by describing. Ka pai, Miss Hickling.
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Hi Chase, I would love to see a photo of your tree hut and hear more about the games you and Kit play in it. How was your banana cake? Was it delicious? Next time I would love to see you add more detail to your writing by describing. Ka pai, Miss Hickling.
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