Cuz Story Ending

Wake up huia I can hear a helicopter they started screaming. Like a pack of wolves were here were here! The polite couldn't hear them so huia and river started a fire but it was to late the helicopter left so they keep hiking until they got very far river and huia took a brake for some food and water they had a rest then the ot to the top of the mountain after 3 hours later river and huia ate some weka and keep going until they heard a big plane there legs aching in pain but they new they had to keep going our they won't get out alive river found a shotgun with 6 bullets he found a big brown dear he shot it and killed it river shouted we have dinner They cooked  the brown deer huia siad luck cuz where did you find it river said in the forest with  blood everywhere  were he found it huia was shaking in fear the deer smelled like very sweet           

we were learning how to think what our story will be at the end

i found easy to think about the story

i found hard to use detail to the story